https://lbp.me/v/q2z1qts/trailer?p=1&l=12

is a level. feedback please!

are bumps allowed?

Well hello there!

I'll play your adventure soon and leave feedback.

i need criticism!

Hahaha, ok, I will give you my critizism after I've played your level! Its in my queue and the trailer is looking fine!

did you already play it?

Hi noseben,

oh yeah, I've already played it, but after the secret cube time race I couldn't find a way to continue the adventure!
But noooowwwww....as prooommised... my crtizismmmmm!!!
Your ideas are fun and I enjoyed the gameplay as far as I've seen it! But there are some things that could get improved.
You should make sure that the gamer can't "fall" out of the level! I also prefer levels where you can't see the editor and its walls and floor! In LBP3 with its 16 layers one can easily create a background placing it on layer 17! One can also create some atmosphere by placing some lights and shadows and its also helpful if you get a hint, where to go! It takes a lot of will power to jump into the depth risking to probably commit suicide. I would avoid long ways to go, the more compact the better!...at least in my opinion.
Nevertheless you seem to have the skills and the creativity to create a really fantastic level! So I'm looking forward to what comes next made by you!

I hope that this has been enough critzism and I didn't disappoint you!

Many greetings, Jürgen^^

Didn't play it yet, but Curi's criticism sounds fair and it makes me feel interested even more.